Elena is a creative designer and writer passionate about visual storytelling and sustainable design.
The Four Spent the Day Together centers on characters seeking fresh starts, struggling to escape drugs or harmful partnerships, only to find hope curdling into aggression. The author repeatedly invokes the phrase "fresh start", transforming it into deliberately jaded through its repetitions. Sentences like "He aimed to start over" and "They chose to begin anew" recur in the narrative. And yet, she appears to be undertaking her individual reinvention, because this appears a different type of work – observational, truly literary. However it proves to be laden with the recurring issues and approaches as past novels.
The writer began as an creative who entered the literary world almost accidentally with her 1997 groundbreaking book I Love Dick, made up of letters to an unreceptive lover, converting intimate women's literature from abjection into defiance. She kept producing books, but the next trio of fascinating and rebarbative novels did not possess the shock and immediacy that the letter form brought to the narrative voice of I Love Dick. Compounding this was her role as a nonconformist creator who had evolved into a major property owner, so there was significant attention on property transactions. It follows that she now wants to try out new kinds of material, directing her gaze to other people's stories, at a period in which she asserts that contemporary political climate turns intimate literature redundant.
The Four Spent the Day Together is organized into a trio of segments, encompassing three generations – each trapped by their backgrounds. We encounter the story of Emma and Jasper, representations of her own mother and father, transitioning from the New York borough to rural Connecticut. Additionally the story of Kraus herself, in the guise of Catt Greene, confronting the late recognition of I Love Dick, the rise of Trump, and her substance-dependent spouse a man named Paul. And there is the story of the murder of one troubled youth by another in a town largely deserted by liberal ideals only 80 miles from Catt's rural residence in the Minnesota countryside.
From my perspective as a reader attracted to honed writing of the type the author herself often avoids, I was captivated by the narrative style of the first section.
As a reader drawn to precise prose of the kind that Kraus herself tends to eschew, I was won over by the storytelling approach of the opening segment. There is a novel degree of detail that allows space for minutiae, like the pail that the youthful Catt dislodges from ice at the opening of the book, aided by her adored dad. "I discovered a frozen plaything!" she declares; "a great plaything", he responds, "the nuanced interpretations of terms rolling around in their mouths like hard candy". The author narrates Emma's story with inquiry and familiarity. "It seemed to Emma she had entered a dream – not entirely her own."
I was bound to become frustrated when I expected this fresh tone could last out the book. The author states here that she resents the enjoyment those who appreciate polished prose have gotten from I Love Dick; she's devoted to disjunction, to the unpolished style she has in common with her inspiration writer Kathy Acker, and the void and recurrence of her past books comes back in the middle section. The protagonist is trying to renovate three dozen dilapidated units in the most troubled areas of Albuquerque while shuttling between Minnesota and LA, failing to help Paul curb his addiction. She experiences powerlessness as her spouse cycles through underfunded jobs as an substance abuse counselor in a society propelled by the rage and anxiety that powers an electoral success. There are several pages about Catt being cancelled on Twitter, her professional designation altered from "writer" to "property owner" on the online encyclopedia. Kraus still seems to invest excessive emotion about this. In a moment she says that she's researching the homicide so that before exiting the region, "she may grasp something about an the United States that her online critics would fail to comprehend, would not even see".
Then we reach to the homicide in question – and the eponymous day experienced by the murdered individual with the murderer and his friends. The author possesses excellent raw material, and knows hour by hour what occurred as the victim Brandon came to meet Brittney after encountering her on a platform where she offered adult photos. He sought a sexual encounter but seems affably to have spent the day in the company of her associates, loitering getting his car mended and covering the cost of food and substances, before being shot by her romantic interest Micah – a youth with psychological issues who has often been institutionalized for fits of anger.
The protagonist becomes fixated by the account, and I found myself captivated by the way that her twin drives towards responsible documentation and daring boundary-pushing tussle in this section. However, I would have preferred her to go further into her personal fixations here. The compelling persona is Brittney herself, who gains dimension partly through Catt's identification with her – another bright, bullied girl spiraling out of control in a struggling, neglected community. The author informs us that Catt speaks to Brittney in jail, but she fails to enact these dialogues. The complete segment feels curiously unresolved, to the degree that the author's storytelling ends almost mid-par
Elena is a creative designer and writer passionate about visual storytelling and sustainable design.